Reflection: I only received one comment for feedback on my
first video, but the recommendation I received was definitely valuable. The
comment mentioned that it is important to mention the
quality of the material rather that what issue the product solved
What changed: In the new video I maintained a similar
introduction, but added a segment explaining the quality of the material in the
end section.
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ReplyDeleteHi Eric! Good work with elevator pitch number two. My first reaction was that it was very well done but one thing that you could work on is your pace. Your pace wasn’t bad by any means but maybe try and slow it down just a little bit. On the positive side, I thought your posture and pronunciation were good and your clear stating of the idea was well done.
ReplyDeleteIt's good you dressed up for the pitch, as it fits the theme of the product. I think the pitch was really good because you memorized it, I found that was the best way to convey all of the information needed, without sounding nervous. You can probably slow down a little bit though, since your pitch is pretty short- but I understand that being nervous can make you talk faster; it happened to me too! You can see my second pitch here: http://brientrep.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-ptich-no-2.html
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