Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3
My previous pitch did not receive much negative feedback aside from the fact that my pitch could definitely be slowed down. I definitely agree with the feedback and did my best to slow down and take my time to fully present my idea in a clear composed manor. Below is my new pitch.
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Hey Eric. I really like your idea. I feel like developing a material to resist sweat would benefit people not only in working positions but those applying for jobs. The interview process is stressful enough and worrying about sweat is just another piece to be concerned with. You spoke eloquently so you definitely improved on that. You might want to consider changing up your background next time. Here's my blog if you want to check it out. http://ent3003anneperry.blogspot.com.es/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteI don't know how many times I could have used your idea at work. In the hot muggy summers I sweat so bad. I could definitely use a sweat wicking dress shirt. I liked your pitch and thought you took the extra effort to put a jacket on for your video. That was above the rim man. Good job.You did sound confident, so I assume you achieved your goal. My only pieces of advice would be to include more information in your elevator pitch, because it can be twice as long as the one you did, even though I think you included a lot of great information :) I think for me, it was just a little hard to keep up because I am not a gamer and have never played video games, so I do not know the technology behind it. I love the name you picked, "Universal Gamer." I think its really catchy and it would be easy to remember. Check out my post! http://tatument3003blog.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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